The mistakes I found on the first slide is punctuation. A comma and a full stop was missing. The first circle is where a comma should be and the second circle is where a full stop should be.
The first circle is where there is not an apostrophe for 'film's'. There is a spelling mistake and says 'subjec' instead of 'subject'. One more mistake in this slide for the word 'woman' is does not fit into the context of the sentence and should be 'women'.
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